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Monday Night Renku Writeup, Oct 20 08

An evening enhanced for me by the wonder of technology. I arrived home from work at about the starting time for the event tonight, the launch of the publication of the Renku written by an adventurous group of poets last month in the vicinity of the Toronto Inukshuk… tired, monday night craggy, dreaming of the rest that forms in the mind from early morning til it can begin for real. The 45 minute or so journey west into the dark and thin rain of late October, by ttc/bicycle combo, to be entirely late anyhow… 

So I phoned Sam Kaufman, he of the cell, and was instantly volubly in the midst of the celebrating group, sheltered from the rain, loud with mirth, happy, and just about ready to begin. The phone was transferred to Marshall Hryciuk, host organizer of the event, and we discussed, and I was, incarnate as cell phone, passed back to Sam to be put on speakerphone. I took this photo of myself lying there readying myself to read:

Then I returned the phone to my ear and found first the small print version then the larger print version of my parallellarenku to read out loud into the phone to the still happy group. It was great. If there’s 3 lines in my paralellarenku I’d include in any final collected works they’d be sentimentally chosen, at best. But as part of the renku experience is echoing whats gone before, it was fun tying the threads…. and then hearing back the originals as Marshall and his grand and equal partner Karen Sohne then read the true Renku being launched. Marshall’s always believed in reading renku haiku and other poetry of brevity twice each one, and I agree, and for tonight’s event at the Troubador they did this in divine form of a duet. Marshall’s voice, which fires the heart with warmth and courage and joie de vivre and texture, Karen’s voice so elegant so made for poetry, redolent with coastal vision and century’s history of the form, so perfect in the slightly enriched cellphone to landline transfer, and the many moments at the Inukshuk real again.

Then, after Marshall read some more poetry, without really asking, they left the phone on speaker and set to jubilantly talking about everything. Having so kindly gone to this extra effort, forgiven my tardiness, they played and played, as I lay waiting to be remembered as from a dream, and listened while watching ‘funniest videos of pets and human beings’ with the sound off, periodically hearing Nick Power

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and Marshall

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and remembering my childhood in New Brunswick 


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it’s the last photo with the baby groundhog representing new brunswick

Comment by john barlow

appreciated the furry you lying next to your safety jacket on the sidewalk. This post of yours celebrates the particular delights of technology that would’ve seemed impossible at any other time in the world. To be present and yet not present, via the listening ear. One of the Oz books told about Ozma’s father who worked at the bottom of a well but his ears came off, like butterflies and flew around gathering up news from the outside world, then flying back to whisper it to him. (He used to be King but was being held prisoner). This story of yours made me remember those ears I read about so many years ago in The Lost King. I used to imagine the ears flying about the world and hovering to gather up a good bit here and there. It put me to sleep at night. And now those ears are called a ’speaker phone.’ Thanks for sharing everything always. Rose

Comment by Rose DeShaw

You give a whole new meaning to “Being There”, John Barlow. Basho (great-great-great grandfather snail) would have been abashed to know such a thing were possible – renku by speaker-ma-phone! Though they say it was done without any tools at all before, just telepathy, all wireless, soundless, all cell-less, though
cat may have been intermediary.
Brings Montreal that much closer to Toronto!
Thanks. Czam

Comment by czandra

John, what a shot of Dex! And we didn’t even know about it. How at one with the moment is that? I hope there are no additional photos of other cats on this site — otherwise, somebody’s gonna end up in the penalty box. Thanks, Pete

Comment by Peter Sero

Lovely comments last night

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